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Sharron Bassano's avatar

"whip-cracking sheets of rain / up the mizzled hills and over family graves. / Clambering clouties plat the naked limbs of Ballyphillip's gorse-bearded jawline."

"...rain-darkened and tested on the teeth - bramble-bound"

Wow! These lines are just epic, Conor -- a description of setting that feels ancient and mysterious. You use words I have never seen, but can easily decipher. I appreciate so much that you do not explain or define for your reader. As a child, I read all the Oz books ( L. Frank Baum) and the fact that I didn't understand much of it, only served to expand my ability to imagine -- as does your writing. Thank you.

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Graeme McAllister's avatar

Eowyn put trees in the ditch

Eowyn your a nasty ....

Not quite as good as yours - seriously though the last six lines are achingly beautiful and I love the expanding shape of the typography, like a storm gathering force.

Well done!

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