Show me a storm that’s not a jealous lover. Éowyn’s awake; wants you to know she’s awake; strips bare the writhing bed of Strangford Lough, whip-cracking sheets of rain up the mizzled hills and over family graves. Clambering clouties plat the naked limbs of Ballyphillip's gorse-bearded jawline. * These corridors are sacred now; mass cards snagged upon the dog-rose; hatchbacks parked parallel to St. Patrick's pointing beams the other way make ghosts of their own love-making, blown from their eternal rest like visions of themselves in their twenties. * The wren receives her own chorus - hollow the bones - having swallowed the lone red rose: silk and sexless and tied to a song post; rain-darkened and tested on the teeth - bramble-bound and chewing the foam; oasis down to styrofoam. * She took them all into the night: every airy head of rapeseed, and all the other drumlins were robbed of the chance to speak. * In the morning, the worst has passed; Éowyn mourning, up and down the Ballyblack: chainsaws idle - the silence of slumber.
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A little context: We had a pretty nasty but awesome storm over the entirely of the British Isles this weekend. Coastal regions of Northern Ireland were hit pretty hard. Record breaking winds were recorded in the region of 114mph! With the exception of a mature Ash down in our garden, I feel we got off pretty light. Some were not so lucky, with damage to their properties and power outages that have lasted until early this week.
One thing I noticed, as I was passing our local Chapel, was that the high winds had cut up from the Lough to shear across the graveyard and lifted all of the grave tributes into the adjacent roadside hedges. There, I found silk roses and red bows, hand written notes to lost loved ones, and even some Christmas wrapping paper that said: Ho Ho Ho.
Normally, I would have driven past such a thing and dismissed it all as rubbish - but these days . . . needless to say I received some funny looks from some of the mass-goers, braving the tail of the storm, with their coats zipped up to their eyeballs, as I rifled through the hedges, looking for inspiration.
Finally, for any readers from outside of Ireland or Britain, who might not know what ‘clouties’ are, I couldn’t provide you with anything as convenient as a definition, without also robbing you of the chance to read, for yourselves, about an ancient and much loved local custom.
Cheers, and thanks for reading,
Conor
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"whip-cracking sheets of rain / up the mizzled hills and over family graves. / Clambering clouties plat the naked limbs of Ballyphillip's gorse-bearded jawline."
"...rain-darkened and tested on the teeth - bramble-bound"
Wow! These lines are just epic, Conor -- a description of setting that feels ancient and mysterious. You use words I have never seen, but can easily decipher. I appreciate so much that you do not explain or define for your reader. As a child, I read all the Oz books ( L. Frank Baum) and the fact that I didn't understand much of it, only served to expand my ability to imagine -- as does your writing. Thank you.
Eowyn put trees in the ditch
Eowyn your a nasty ....
Not quite as good as yours - seriously though the last six lines are achingly beautiful and I love the expanding shape of the typography, like a storm gathering force.
Well done!